All Comments on 'Time Stops in the Mediterranean Day 01'

Hehe I love this evil man.

Great story. Please continue it!

Time-stop sounds fun, but doesn't stand up to primary logic. Clothing and soft tissue would be as hard as granite. If an interloper in a time-stopped condition tried (successfully) to manipulate the flesh of a time-stopped person (ie moved it, however minutely), that person would emerge from the condition with horribly shredded personal parts.

Unless of course you, Mr Dmaxc, come up with a convincing scenario where this bit of logic is decently circumvented ...

Well it rather depends. Time Stop is a well established, if minority, genre of erotic literature (and rather amusing Japanese videos). The premise being most everything stops but not the 'hero' of the story. I do not think your idea that everything becomes fixed, solid and immoveable follows from the logic. Whilst time has stopped things can be moved by the action of a mover for whom time has not stopped. I have endeavoured to explore some of the consequences of time stop in this story and also 'Bracken' and the 'Green Man' such as water not flowing back into place if the 'hero' moves through it. To me the real problem is that if time had stopped then light would stop as well and our hero would be in pitch darkness as his retinas would not be receiving information - which would be a bit of a nuisance both for him and for the story! Max

As you can see I have continued reading in the theme of timestop and enjoying it immensely, your sense of fun and humorous retribution contribute wonderfully to the tale.