All Comments on 'Timeros: A Clash Of Gods Ch. 02'

by TravellingWilly

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AnarchiaAnarchiaover 11 years ago

great story; i look forward to seeing how it continues. but you could do with a little more attention to punctuation when proof reading - a few full stops here and here would go a long way to making this more readable :)

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