All Comments on 'Timestopper Begins Ch. 04'

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Anonymousover 9 years ago

This story is so good, love the slow corruption and escalation. Great bi elements in this chapter too. Eager to read more!

Microbevel8 about 7 years ago

Nicely building

The Monty Python tune kept playing in my head as our hero invaded his neighbor. Things looking sunny, I'd say.

Anonymousalmost 5 years ago

A big turnoff to have him suddenly start fondling some nude guy. I have no interest in reading about two guys.

Anonymousabout 1 year ago

It feels odd for him to be so willing to have sex with a bunch of random girls on the beach but be conflicted about his neighbor

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Dr. Max Cummings Born Maximilian Audacious Rollo Cummings on 29 April 1889 in what was then the British South Indies. Sent, at an early age, to boarding school in England, he moved successively from Linbury Court Prep. School to Greyfriars before matriculating, with the under...

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