All Comments on 'Timestopper Begins Ch. 24'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
I Love This Story!

"...after all it would be quite fun to take her again out of time whilst she was talking to Carson - have his wife whilst he 'watched.' "

This sounds really erotic! Maybe even a quick flash in real time to feel Cindy clamp down, feel her big breasts sway because of you and have Carson see his neighbor for just a split second.

I really enjoy your writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Pregnancys ?

Just gotta say i love everything about this story.

But, a little question. Pregnancys ? There is never any real talk about protection or the girls being on the pill and his constant cumming inside the girls has me wondering. Accidental pregnancys or we gonna assume hes shooting blanks ?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
No redeeming characteristics

This story needs a protagonist.

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Dr. Max Cummings Born Maximilian Audacious Rollo Cummings on 29 April 1889 in what was then the British South Indies. Sent, at an early age, to boarding school in England, he moved successively from Linbury Court Prep. School to Greyfriars before matriculating, with the under...

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