All Comments on 'Timestopper Begins Ch. 28'

Have a erection that lasts all day and able to cum 2 or 3 cups each orgasm.

Sadly, your story was so unbelievable I ended up skimming through it. Believe me, you lose your swimsuit and you'll notice it and for it to suddenly vanish would elicit screams of terror because no one knows what happened and imagine the young lady who found herself in the men's change room not once but twice...that would be terrifying and you can bet the lifeguards would be involved and the second time they would be reviewing security cams...get the picture? A woman disappearing and then suddenly reappearing with no explanation of how???

Lastly, how do you differentiate between an underage teenager and an 18 yr old in a swimming pool with no way to determine if they are of legal age? Which is an odd thought because If you are willing to rape (and that's what non consensual sex is) then why stop there? At this point, you have terrorized numerous young women, raped countless women, all of a sudden you find out that the teenager you fucked was actually 14...well...shit happens right? So the whole pool event, while humorous to you, leaves a foul taste in my mouth with the potential of unintended consequences. Consequences you should be thinking of.

Drmaxc has been writing unbelievable, whimsical pieces for years. I quite enjoy them. Seriously, when have you ever met a person who could stop time? If you are capable of accepting that premise, why would anything else bother you?

Hasn't everyone had a fantasy where there are no recriminations, no comeback so you are free to do whatever you want.

This story series is just that put in to words, So if, just if, it happened to you how would you handle it?

I think the writer has handled it well as the time stopper starts out with good intentions and descends to his baser emotions as there is no one to wag a finger at him. As an outside observer it is sometimes uncomfortable as in the last episode as we are bound by conventions and know what is right and wrong.

It is so easy to slide in to wrong doing e.g. I'll just borrow a few notes from petty cash until Monday.....