All Comments on 'Tina'

by Wolf1678

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AverageBearAverageBearover 6 years ago
Difficult to get into it

There were only a couple of sentences of dialogue in the entire story - and so it was difficult to feel a connection to the people involved. I'd suggest including some conversations for the reader to glean insights into their feelings, without having everything simply be a description. I see that the story is highly rated, so I'll wait to provide a rating until I see a story posted that lets me listen to the characters in my mind. Maybe others like a story that's all description, but it's not my cup of tea.

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