by Wolf1678
There were only a couple of sentences of dialogue in the entire story - and so it was difficult to feel a connection to the people involved. I'd suggest including some conversations for the reader to glean insights into their feelings, without having everything simply be a description. I see that the story is highly rated, so I'll wait to provide a rating until I see a story posted that lets me listen to the characters in my mind. Maybe others like a story that's all description, but it's not my cup of tea.