by RC_of_Doom
I really liked your story. The dialog had the feel of the old spy novels, and the noir movies genre. You have laid the ground work of the main characters quite nicely. I am looking forward to any more chapters. I liked also that you gave enough information about how things were done, while still leaving a lot to the readers imagination. Again thank you for the story.
Bainsidhe
You have your own voice and your own style. You make it easy to suspend disbelief. Keep writing!
The story is absolutely splendid. It will be difficult to maintain the same level of interest, but do your best.
i found this story very entertaining and enjoyable .very imaginative plot can not wait to see more example of your writing
It is about as clever a story as I have ever encountered on Literotica.
I liked it a lot. There should be sequels, “The Adventures of ‘Goyim Murphy’, the Ace Mossad Agent”. I’d like to see that. But even as a one-off, it’s a good story.
oh I remember she was blown up and away. TK U MLJ LV NV
I think back blast from the LAW would have totaled the classroom he was in And maybe even him.
Ooops, came back to the wrong story to comment, sorry. Meant for 'Triple Jeopardy'. I'll try to remember not to move on from a story so fast after voting so I don't come back to the wrong when I think of a comment.