All Comments on 'Tinkerbell'

Good build-up. Hot sex. A winning combination! Taking care to address Marilyn's disappearing reluctance was key! Thanks for a hot story! ****

This is one of the better stories of this type I have seen on this site. Very believable how about a chapter two ? Very well done

Thank you for the encouraging comments. I finally wrote a chapter 2. It doesn't really have much sex (except for a brief masturbation scene), but I needed to explain Marilyn's reaction to the encounter with Lucy and Ward, her state of mind in relationship to who she is, so that I could move on from there. Please read it and tell me what you think. I hope it sets the scene for chapter 3, and maybe a fourth one. We'll see how it goes.