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All Comments on 'Tiny Red Swim Shorts'

by Tigerseye23

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Hope there is more:

Good story, perfect length. Would be excited to

see if the romance continues.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Really liked it

Liked the playful, unhurried setup. Liked the way that in the end it was she who jumped on him.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Congratulations!

You are a talented author, with even greater potential:) If you would like to discuss your writing in more depth and detail, contact me at fgdonlon@att.net.

Prof. Gav

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Present tense or past tense. Pick one, just one, please and stick with it. Gaagh!

curt6986curt6986almost 2 years ago

really good story keep it up.

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