by imaginethis
i dont care for enhanced breasts at all...they dont feel right in your hands or the firm underside when you are sucking them. i really like fairly largenatiral breasts, even if they sag ever so little. but the very best are almost flat firm breasts with generous nipples hard as a rock. you bite them, pinch them, bring them right to the edge of pain, or, carefully if they like it, a littler beyond paunsul, wow. find yourself a flast chested woman who likes a lillte tit torture and youve got the greatest fuck ever.
... but having them reduced is as wrong as women having them pumped up. Natural is best, and if they happen to be small, all the better. Anything more than a mouthful is a waste.
Nice idea, great concept. I agree with the poster who said natural is best, and any alteration is just as bad as another. But that said, I think you're onto something here-it's just the dialogue. It's ham-fisted and doesn't come off as real conversation. Work on that, and you'll have some killer erotic literature.
It's one thing to like small breasts but your main character's hatred of big-breasted women shows some severe anger issues. Asking another person to have surgery, just to please oneself, is abusive. I hope this story doesn't reflect your attitude toward woman in real life.
lost me at page 2 when Mike became an even bigger ass for forcing her to choose you or her breasts. Be careful what you wish for, some women that go through breast reduction are left with no sensitivity at all and/or become so self conscious about themselves, you'll be lucky if you ever see her without a bra on again.
This is well-written and all. But the content left me with alot of confusion...not to mention with a couple of continuities...
Like, I understand how feeling unattracted to your partner can happen in real life...but how can he act like it's not his fault if he's known Brenda for so many years? Chicks don't suddenly sprout D-cups in one week, so therefore he shouldn't try to stick with her knowing that he won't feel anything for her.
And dude, if my girlfriend asked me to go under the knife because she has a vision that her boyfriend should look like, rather than find someone else that matches it...I wouldn't even stick by her. I'm already feeling for Brenda.
tl;dr: Mike should've just gone ahead and go with Molly--and you should've made it look like he wasn't sitting around with a girl he doesn't even remotely like physically for so many years and then all of a sudden act like its her fault. It doesn't make him look right.
As a committed lesbian with large, almost unwieldy breasts, I recently started a relationship with a very young woman with a tiny body. She is a wildcat in bed. Please write more stories of this ilk. They are so exciting.
In concert with the comment above, I am a happy lesbian woman who lusts for petite women as lovers. Regardless of what is said during our private moments, there is always that feeling that these wonderful women have suffered, almost always privately, in the feeling that they were not visually sexually attractive regardless of being stunningly beautiful. Lovemaking is exhausting and wonderful.
Please write more of this genre since they will be read by more folks than you might imagine. The themes could be as varied as your imagine allows but the result will always be the same. Total devotion, attention, and fulfillment, based on the woman of course.
How about a dominant petite woman who seduces large breasted 'entitles' housewives of all ages making them totally submissive to their svelte Mistress' demands or a club for dominant petite women to train and trade 'entitled' women for their enjoyment.
I love tiny tits but didn't enjoy the story at all. It wasn't arousing. Instead the story reads like someone trying to working through personal issues of resentment using the story. The main character isn't happy with his current partner and doesn't have the courage to leave them for his ideal woman, nor is the main character willing to do what is necessary to pursue the woman of his dreams. That inability to move forward results in anger and hostility towards the big breasted partner and the flimsy arguments to justifying that anger; entitlement is used to justify the bdsm. This is a not a story of bdsm for the sake of bdsm but rather self-hatred directed outwards onto someone else. It feels like the main character is angry with himself and feels trapped in the relationship and is taking that out on their big breasted partner. If a character prefers small breasts that should be the only reason they need to enjoy that desire. I couldn't enjoy a story where the protagonist took their own frustrations out on someone else. I was distracted the whole story long because it read like a psychiatric plea for help.