All Comments on 'Tit for Tat'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Happy New Year

Interesting story. I liked it a lot. You are a very good writer. If I may make one comment, I haven't read much of your work, but I like dialogue and you had a bit too much narative that could have been written as dialogue. Still, I enjoyed the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
lol

Love the poetic justice.

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Former SR71 pilot, currently professional writer and book editor; writes under name "habu" on other erotica sites. My erotica books can be found under the author name habu or Dirk Hessian (and coauthored books with Sabb under the names Shabbu or Stephen Kessel) at S...