All Comments on 'Titans Ch. 04'

Uh why is it in incest/taboo?

Short/ long, its perfect as long as its written well, and your chapters always are so don't sweat the length or the time between postings.

As a side note, was this put in incest/taboo because of the 'you're like a daughter and a sister to me" line? The dude was a mentor to one of many clone babies. I mean maybe if the girls or boys went at it together it would make sense, but he just needs to get over the paradigm shift in their relationship.

PS Unless I'm mistaken, it seems as though maybe our other, other girl isn't trapped permanently in the dreamscape. That would be nice, until we find her. Then it will probably be sad.

Pretty sure I submitted this to SciFi and Fantasy, so not sure why it ended up in Incest/Taboo. I did notice it taking a lot longer to upload than usual, so maybe one of the website staff changed it?

Sorry for all the problems with this chapter everyone, hopefully it will be back to normal in January.

Very good story. Keep it going please.

...in a building, the surface they are on, is the ground. They are not standing... falling, hitting or landing on the floor.

Floors are inside buildings. The 'floor', outside, is referred to as the GROUND.

Please make the appropriate accommodations.