by OnAndOn_Anon
To echo John's comment, not happy about the cliffhanger even if it was a very exciting chapter up to that point.
Well done! So much set up for the next chapter! It ought to be a great one.
I didn't see THAT coming! You, my fine writing friend, have a whole lotta balls (vamps, elves, orcs, giants, genetically engineered beings that have multiple planes of existence and control incredibly advanced mechs) in the air!
I am very interested in seeing how you maintain their orbit (or crash them into each other). Please keep going - this is a very intriguing tale you've started!
Best wishes!
I kinda think its a bit late in the plot to suddenly turn an old friend into a very powerful enemy vampire intent on killing all the good guys. There should have been some warning or clues before.