by M.A.Thompson
Not technically perfect; there were, for example, some changes in verb tense (although it is entirely plausible that the guy would talk that way). Still, this was a very poignant piece and seemed very real, thus the 100% score. Please do keep writing!
Cheers,
Lalenya :^)
I guess a tear ran down my cheek and my eyes are still full as I write this. This is s reflection of my best freind. He died a couple months ago and I brought him a ProV Titelist to place in his coffin. He always wanted to buy some Titelists but being the good Scott he wasn't likely to part with that much for a golf ball.Maybe God will let him tee off early with his Titelist. Thanks
Being a pro of the mini golf circuit LOL
You have an incredible talent with your descriptions and emotional translation to a reader.
Keep up the good work :)
Love golf. In semi retirement as a shrink I actually work at a golf course and at a custom club store. Even so I make certain to cuddle my wife every night and 4 to 5 nights a week we make love. Golf is great but loving is better.
A great job of writing and reminding.