All Comments on 'Tits for Tips'

This is a well written viginette, nice plot; dialogue, descriptions, and character development, are quite appropriate for it's length.

My only reaction is that it could be so much better if you'd take the time to develop the plot line giving the reader deeper personalities and possibly even developing the short time together into a relationship.

My personal feelings anyway.

Not too involved, which I like. The part with her finger in his ass wasn't appealing, thoe.

Nice stuff - fer cowboys - wham bang thanky-uh Ma'am !

Fair enough for cowboys but ya gotta stroke us city slickers more salaciously - gradual n salacious - ya gotta be subtle, dude - I'm on your side - Ah knows you're trying.

Sometime romance is nice, sometimes needs to be filled and rewarded