All Comments on 'TJ Ch. 03'

A bright story for a sunlit morning. Well written and enjoyable. But somehow I see storm clouds gathering. And whilst that makes better drama it would be a pity if the close and loving relationship between the parties is damaged, even temporarily.

But I can’t wait to see how this one develops.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us.

I hope this doesn’t come across as bashing your story..

Your writing skills are undeniable. I can’t sit here and say that your choice of words or grammar or anything like that is bad, because it’s not. However, I’m so turned away from the story because of how unrealistic it is. Their relationship is moving far too quickly to allow any sense of an actual bond to form, yet Sean is ready to come out at school and tell everyone about TJ. Theyre also both confessing their immense attraction for each other. I’ll continue reading, but I hope their relationship is more fleshed out rather than just the rare occurrence that two gay guys happened to cross paths.

Just wanted to tell you how much i enjoyed your story and hope to see more very soon. I grew up in a time when you could not be so open. And i was tearing at my heart to read how these to young men came together . Please keep it going and thanks for writing . John

Uhh poor Josh. Very interesting story

Anonymous three comments down was never a teenage gay boy if they think this story, this relationship, is moving too fast to be believable. Hell, the author uses "y'all" correctly!! These are southern gay boys and as a southern once-upon-a-time boy, and gay, I'm not mad, I'm not doubting the pace. Is this a tad twisted? Brother Father yes it is. It is also a delight to read.