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TheReticentWriterTheReticentWriterover 4 years ago

Pretty good though having Becks seeing Ginger's eyes before the blindfold is removed was a bit much and confusing.

Voyeur326Voyeur326over 4 years agoAuthor
Oh God OOPS (Reticent's Comment)

Reticent: I can't believe I did that. I think I found the mistakes and corrected them, but it will be a while before Lit can replace the text. Thanks for pointing that out!

-Voy

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White female. Love reading and writing. I have three stories on Lit right now - they were originally on another writing site that has stricter rules than Lit (so my stories are a little tamer than some others on this site). As for reading, I frequent fan fiction sites, but I...