All Comments on 'To Capture Melody'

A lovely story of seduction. Great job. Thanks Maximina too!

Thank you for sharing Maxima's story with us; I hope she enjoyed it as much as I did!

Very well done - five stars and please bring us more.

What a fantastic and horny story. Thank you so much. I started to idly read it, fully dressed before bed, but the idea got me so wet my panties quickly came down as I began to finger myself. I am now writing this naked, legs spread apart, having just cum messily all over my hand! Not my intention, but absolutely loved it. I'm making a bit of a mess on my keyboard now though. :-)

Mel. X.

Hot fun. Well done.

that was very good & nice little plot, I like it!! Love to see how it turns out and whther she calls for more!

Reading this i got so hot. I'll be reading it again and again!

Yea that was real good enjoyed it immensely.Hope you continue it though it could be a slave master theme....lol

That was wow! Every bit of it was well done! Will we be able to get a part 2? Im really dying for a next chapter.