All Comments on 'To Come Again, and Again...'

Well thought out, written, and presented. Good work.

Very well written with great original ideas. One of the best anal scenes I've ever read. I hope to see more from you.

I only have 2 issues.

The first is the ending is too abrupt. My suggestion would be to continue it just a little further, possibly with a scene with just the girls.

The other is a few grammatical and punctuation issues. Nothing horrendous, but they did catch my attention.

Overall, definitely one of my faves!