All Comments on 'To Err is Divine Ch. 01'

Well written and easy to follow, once your get the names straight. Let's see, a horny stepmother. horny teen and an impotent father, look at he possibilities.

Can't wait for ch 2.

I was disappointed a bit when the mother was killed in an accident. I expected it to be a story of family, where father deflowers daughter and mother initiates son into the pleasures of sex. Atleast now make it now between stepmom and son, and father rediscovering his sexual vigour by dumping his load into his married daughter's inviting cunt during her next visit to maternal home for delivery of her first chil

Your build up was excellent but your abrupt ending was a big disappointment for me as it showed haste to finish the story. Good effort.

I was aware of the bunion malady of feet, but was unable to find another definition that might pertain to the story? Help, pls.

The term 'bunion' is the more commonly used as a synonym for 'vest' in South India. But your point is well taken as it doesn't figure as a synonym any longer in the Dictionary. I shall avoid usage of this term in future. Thanks for the comment.

Kudos brother, absolutely interesting and lively. You brought out and described everything in lovely manner. I am sure, next chapter will detailed how the voyeur Smita got deprived lust fulfilled, as well.

Waiting for more, and thanks for your note.