All Comments on 'To Err is Divine Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Next Episode

Excellent!!! Now that he knows all about her he needs to take charge and control, dominate, tease and make her completely submissive to him....hope you do this....waiting for the nxt episodes....pls do it soon...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
nxt episode...

eagerly awaiting for the next episodes.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Nice.... Superb

Really nicely composed.... and superb

panditjipanditjiabout 8 years ago
Fantastic.....is all I could say....!

It was a beautifully written piece, I am at loss of words. You have not tried to make it overly raunchy and kept the subtlety of intra family relationship alive. Oh it was just beautiful.

Aussie1951Aussie195110 months ago
What a shame

You didn’t continue on with this story and by the looks of thing you never will. It’s been years since your last post. You have so many unfinished stories and the frustrating thing is most of them are.good.

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