All Comments on 'To Forsake All Others Ch. 01'

Would have been a better title. Two different men in the story and they don't jive. After the blowjob he became another person that would never have allowed it to begin with. Fortunately his wife is also a whore so it will all work out. Thankfully there is no scoring so I won't run into this misleadingly titled story again.

Very nice. Full marks ***** by my standards. But I understand why author bypasses the scoring system.

Did Jessica and Rachael get together and how did that work out?

Oh boy .... dont keep us waiting too long for the next part.

see you thought ahead and go rid of scoring. Perhaps she knew because she got the girl to play to be able to tell him she had cheated, possibly with his friend.

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Lastly, I look forward to seeing someone accept my challenge and attempt a guess as to where this story is heading. So far, you're oh-for-one.

It will turn out to be all a dream and Bobby did not really shoot JR. That's the best I can do without reading the piece.

This story could go several different ways. And still wind up some where other than where you the author, or we, the readers figured it would go. Good luck with the next chapter, I'll be looking for it. Its just like a day time soap opra

Don't know what's ahead, but I know it will be different from the rest. Consider me on board.

I switched from using Tide to a bargain store brand of detergent.

So what the FUCK were you doing with that skank again!!??

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Well dear, you see...the reason that Phil divorced Susan is because, well...Susan and I have kind of been ...intimate together with each other...for a while now.

GrandpaM got it! How the hell did you guess she switched laundry detergents??

So far, one person (who contacted me directly) has correctly predicted the next chapter. It ain't easy coming up with new spins on age-old plot lines, folks.

Thanks to those of you who have played along. The second (and final) chapter was submitted yesterday. It should be posted by Tuesday.

For writing.

Because it wasn't very well written and it certainly wasn't entertaining.

I believe that his wife set it up. Knew of the tension between them, how their own sex life was dwindling, and how she wanted to either test him or spice up their sex life.

Drakkaius

Chapter 1 was:

To Forsake All Others (title)

A married man faces temptation (subtitle)

Loving Wives (category)

Since the Loving Wife hasn't yet done anything that would put Chapter 1 in this category, perhaps we should assume that she will do something in Chapter 2 ?

Perhaps 'A married woman faces temptation' ?

L

I could try to guess like others, but I prefer to wait for the next part...Even if I had my own ideas...I liked this part...the guilty feelings and all...3* for now

Joe, you're a very good writer and I always enjoy your stories. I won't try to guess where you're going with this one since I expected the action to be between Hubby and friend's wife from the very beginning. Looking forward to reading the ending.

BTW I'd sure like to see some stories written by those anonymous critics, who feel fit to inform a person with as many high scoring stories to his credit as you have, that you can't write. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

I know exactly what happened (and, NO, I haven't read Ch2 yet!) But my wife would not appreciate reading about the antics of my nom-de-lecteur!

Interesting. Is the wife having or has had an affair so now she has a hall pass? Or so she thinks? Would our one time cheating husband feel the same way? I guess we'll see...

It has a symmetry to it if Rachael and Jessica had the same experience with Jessica being the passive partner.

no sense speculating, but a little healthy apprehension might be warranted.

Wow...introspective and well written...Oh, how we try to rationalize our own shortcomings. Can't wait to read the next installment...appears the wife has a confession to make also. This chapter deserves a higher rating so I'm bumping it up!

Sitting here is annoying AF

Wonder how often we dudes would succumb if we were constantly hit on like hot Femmes a?

I could.guess where.you're going with this, but I won't. I hope it doesn't turn into a cliche wife goes wild for revenge story. Hopefully, you're too good for that.