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KingCuddleKingCuddlealmost 6 years ago
Too much story. Too many characters.

Your adorable personality still shines through, intermittently.

But it's too hard to follow which characters are speaking in which timeline.

Maybe if you tried different indentations for each cluster?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Among the best

I have read a lot of stories at this site. Some are very good. This is among the very best.

plumberdonplumberdonover 6 years ago
Super

Loved it😁 I Hope there is more to come.Well done Thanks

oldermale1948oldermale1948over 6 years ago
Loved it

I hope there will be more, lots of possiblities

ConversationsConversationsover 6 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

I'm delighted you enjoyed it. Thanks for letting me know.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Bravo

Spectacular! Thank You.

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There's not enough room here, so I'm serializing my autobiography as 'Some Day, All This Will Be Yours'... Well, I guess 'French Letters' should count as an episode, too.