All Comments on 'To Love a Vampire Ch. 01'

this is a great start and cannot not wait to see it continue

I love it and think you're off to a great start. I really hope you post the next chapter soon.

Great start, and a very moving one.

When's the next story available, can't wait to read it, looks like its going to be really good.

Fab.love to see more

I'd click on it. This genre isn't one I normally read, but I'm sure glad I read this one. Well done with 2 verys. Thank you.

I can totally see myself falling in love with this story. Thanks for it and please do continue! :)

Please write the next installment!! Love it!!

if liv and julius spent 2 years together before his death why is there a video showing her being raped and julius dying for her? the way i'm reading it she was assaulted then spent the two years with julius. i just want to clear up my confusion because i am so looking forward to the next installment.

I luv it and his son is a bastard

Yes he met her after she had been attacked,but then the night he was killed she was raped again begging for his life.

The storyline isn't bad, but this beginning part is confusing and could use some editing. First, it's difficult to tell the difference between what is happening in the past and present. Second, there are a lot of awkward sentences - finding an editor would help with this. Finally, it doesn't feel as though the dialogue flows very well; again, an editor can help you out here. Rereading your work several times before posting is also a good idea, especially if you allow it to sit for several days before going back to it.

im just in aw i havent ever ever read such a stering story. i cryed... ;-]...

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Are you continuing this story? I've been checking back every so often hoping for more!!! :) Awesome story, please don't abandon it :)