To Love a Vampire Ch. 01

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"You call me if you need anything." He slid the card in her pocket.

"I will." Liv didn't have the heart to tell him Augustus took her cell since Jules had paid for it.

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Before she left she hugged Augustus.

"Augustus, I wish you could understand how much I loved him. Goodbye. Augustus, he loved you. When I don't show on Friday just do the will. It's all yours I won't be there." Augustus just gave her a look of disgust and walked off.

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As Liv left her home she saw Lucus' limo approaching. She hurried into the limo so he didn't see her.

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Valerius headed to the back room where he heard Augustus, neither of them noticed Lucus approaching. "Your father would be ashamed of you. You are one cold heartless bastard." Valerius was beginning to get irate with Augustus now.

"He'd be proud. I convinced her Lucus blames her for his death and everyone despises her. I've locked off every account. I'm not a huge bastard I let her keep the $40 in her wallet."

He thought what a bitch to move out of his father's room after his death. He then saw folders under the dresser. He saw the photos of her ex-husband's handy work. Then he saw an envelope with a DVD in it.

Lucus stormed in like a force to be reckoned with, anger etched on his face, "Augustus, I want you to tell me what the hell you have done!"

"I had the money grubbing bitch thrown out. I'm fighting the will. I've locked all her bank accounts. She doesn't deserve anything else." He explained how he convinced her everyone hated her.

"You did what?! Augustus, give me the DVD. I originally didn't want you to see this but I think since you've proven you are unable to be an adult, you need to see how your father died."

"Lucus, I have tried to talk to him. He won't listen."

Lucus unpacked his laptop out of the bag. "Hand me the DVD. Augustus it's time for you to see this."

Over the next 45 minutes the DVD showed Liv being raped over and over in front of Julius. It showed Jules begging for her life and her offering her own for his. "Just don't kill him, let him go and you can keep me forever and do whatever you want to me. Just let him go."

Augustus got to see his father die as Liv was being brutally raped but screaming, "take me, just take me. Kill me instead of him."

Lucus began to speak, "Augustus we will discuss punishment on another day. I will send men out to find Liv and bring her back."

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I hope you like the start of this story, feedback is appreciated. And please, don't forget to vote :)

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lilybellelilybelleover 12 years ago
still waiting.. :)

Are you continuing this story? I've been checking back every so often hoping for more!!! :) Awesome story, please don't abandon it :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

im just in aw i havent ever ever read such a stering story. i cryed... ;-]...

from anonymous...

AnnOnymousFantasiaAnnOnymousFantasiaover 14 years ago
Confusing

The storyline isn't bad, but this beginning part is confusing and could use some editing. First, it's difficult to tell the difference between what is happening in the past and present. Second, there are a lot of awkward sentences - finding an editor would help with this. Finally, it doesn't feel as though the dialogue flows very well; again, an editor can help you out here. Rereading your work several times before posting is also a good idea, especially if you allow it to sit for several days before going back to it.

coffinbaitcoffinbaitover 14 years ago
To help anonymous

Yes he met her after she had been attacked,but then the night he was killed she was raped again begging for his life.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I HATE AUGUST

I luv it and his son is a bastard

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