All Comments on 'To Love a Were Ch. 10'

Interesting that Draven can read Amber's mind. Still somewhat confused though Fiona runs hot and cold so much it is hard to keep track and I still don't see why she is still so in need of Alaron. So will she mate with Eian now or not? Is Draven mated I can't remember. I will just have to wait until the next chapter is eventually posted.

I don't know... Too be honest, I loved Fiona - before she changed. I loved her innocence and kindness. But now she seems too hot and cold all of the time, and I feel like she's losing her kindness. Please, don't get me wrong, I love your story and I will continue reading no matter what, but why does Fiona have to change as much as she is? I really hope that, if you don't mind, you could maybe being a little bit back of the old Fiona, the sweet and caring one. But I do kind of like how she's growing up a bit, I guess. Hahaha! I'm so conflicted! >.< Well, anyways, I love "To Love a Were" :D

Fiona is usually a sweet-tempered person but at this moment, she's having a hard time getting used to her powers because they require her to be in a state of irrational anger to work. That's why she's blowing hot and cold. Vampire abilities only present itself to more older Vampires [as said by Draven] and being young makes her more susceptible to the fiery aspect of her powers.

As for Alaron, I have decided not to kill him and I see him more as the troubled child in the family. And Fiona is a person who loves unconditionally and don't forget [recall the scene she had with Sydney in chapter 6] that he kept her sane when she was being awakened. With that said, Alaron will become better in the next chapter. As I've shown here, he has found something and he sees it as a way to redeem himself.

for clearing that up I know Al helped her but he also killed her family I would have thought regaining her memory might have made a difference to how she feels about him.

Thank you for this nice twist! As always, you leave us wanting more and more.......

another great chapter...keep them coming. do i see a sequel in the future with Drake and Amber??? could they be mates.

I'm sure we all remember growing up and the an gist it caused us. Fight w/our parents, being mad at our siblings, and how are best friends put up w/us? Well it seems to me that Fiona is doing damn good considering all the growing up she's had to do in such a short amount of time. That she's learning to deal w/all her new powers can only help her relationship w/Eian. And Eian, well do you know the old saying "He can eat crackers in my bed anytime", I'd let him! As for Alaron, well lets just hope his attempt at a good deed means he's finally growing up too. Draven, he just seems to be a good guy. And what's up w/ him and Amber? Aramis, I'm still on the fence w/him. He wants something that he thinks he'll get with the marriage of Fi and Eian. I hope in the coming chapters you tell us more about Gabbie and also how the newlyweds are doing. As always, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

unlike others on this site, i prefer to let the authors direct where the story goes and not criticize. We are not the ones writing it so who are we to dictate. If you think you can write better than an author on here who shares their talent with us for free - then - by all means - post a story for us all to tear apart

Please proceed with the story at your own pace and with where you want it to go and most of us will still be here reading it and avidly waiting for the next chapters

hugs

kate

great work and I for one cannot wait to see whether Eian and Fiona will mate properly maybe with the help of the new drug the brothers are developing. Well done.

"""He was blunt and honest with her to the point of brashness and let her do whatever she wanted to do."""

let me fix that to what it truly should be: """He was blunt and honest with her to the point of brashness and forced her to do whatever he wanted her to do."""

that is the literal actions that he has taken, and if you where to put it into a proper scenario, he forced her into sex, AKA rape, then she started liking it in the end, and now is "ok" with it, point being here however, hes still a rapist in this scenario...

not only that but you REALLY tried hard to make us all sympathize with the relationship between them, but you literally did a 180 on their attitudes, both as singles and together, reading back over it, you really cant seem to stay on one line, to keep the "ok" image you are now trying to paint of the jackass, 3 of your previous chapters would have to be re-written, as they dont coincide with how you have pained them both as singles and a pair in this chapter

I wish you luck in your writings, and hopefully someone to come along and set you straight so you stop jumping the tracks of your own story line

Anon|1856

Never dissapoints, always the bestest of reads with this series another awesome chapter, loved it.

Jorjiah xxx.

It's a pity that the author like so much Alaron to avoid him to be killed by Eian.

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No i haven't read the others capthers yet but i suppose that don't happen.