All Comments on 'To Love a Wolf Ch. 07'

I'm definitely happy Avani finally stood up for herself. Now Avani has a couple more people supporting her to help her become stronger.

So good, but so short. Please more more.

I'm liking this new Avani. Her and Trace are the new power couple

Who are Robert and Trinity Chambers? At first i thought maybe she was Avani's mom until the very last sentence. I have missed this story please don't stay away so longl

You are 100%correct that Robert and Trinity Chambers are indeed Avani' s parents. Trinity is her mother believed to have been killed 10 years ago. That will be addressed more in chapter 8 as to what happened with that. Thanks for the love more coming soon

Ugh not loving this story I was hoping to though, sorry. I see a lot in these teen, young adult romances (because that's my age) where the male main character is basically a hoe or sleeping with a girl who he "thinks" he loves only to find some virginal girl he's "supposed" to be with (usually not in the guise of werewolf mating but just the story arc) while leaving the other girl high and dry. I don't seem to understand why no one ever feels sorry for that girl? He basically lead her on because I guarantee the guy knows her personality and knows she'll go off and be deemed that "vindictive bitch". But does he mess with her anyway? Of course. Not to say that the female protagonist deserves to be attacked. I am glad Vonnie stood up for herself but this all wouldn't have happened if Trace wasn't an ass leading Rachel on with sex ( and we know for a girl it's way more than that in most cases) . I dunno I'm just big on how the guys treat people in the stories, no bodie's perfect and this is a work of FICTION, but I think most of the people that read these stories (like myself) like to put themselves in the positions of different characters which makes the story more fun and exciting. All and all you're a good author because you did get me rolled up lol and I'll look for future works from you but probably not this one.

Nope, I'm done. Why does there have to be that childish bullshit fighting? She couldn't assert herself ANY other way?

You really need to read your writing to yourself aloud, then you'd see the many, many mistakes that made it difficult to read your story and please learn the difference between YOUR and YOU'RE. You use 'your' all the time. Also learn where to put COMMAS.

Please update again soon! Can't wait for the next update!

More Please can't bare waiting but I'll do it

I need chapter 8; I check everyday!!! The complaints regarding the direction you are taking this story are purely opinion and preference, personally I love it I think it's fun! At first I didn't like the fact that her heart was torn between two wolves, but now I know that something fishy is going on I can't wait to read more

Can you please finish, it's really good!

Lol I was dying at the “ate my pussy like it was his last meal" SO funny!!!! PLEASE I need the next chapter

What happened to this story? I loved it.

... this series and it looked interesting. I am learning however to check before I start reading as I don't want to be left hanging. I'll come back and give it a read once it gets done.

JUST FINISH IT MATE!

I think it's incredibly rude and selfish that the majority(not all) of these interracial love authors on literotica DON'T finish their stories. But what's really f*cked up is the fact that they don't even notify their faithful readers about the status of their stories. It's like they don't even care and that's just flat out WRONG.

How rude

This is a great story! I hope school and life has treated you well.

Maybe you can come back? Finish this interesting story? I really want to know this mysterious 4th party

Another one bites the dust