All Comments on 'To Love the Stars'

This is the first time I’ve read your work and was completely engrossed by the story. A true pleasure! I will look through your submissions......

Thanks for an enjoyable read!

Swedeq

...it's from "Mass Effect," right? There's a planet you can scan that reveals Asari are selling tickets to witness the event in a few centuries.

Thank you. I hope you find time to write again soon.

Really like the story and your storytelling.

Only grizzle is there was no shadow in the story. Mush is nice but needs a problem to be overcome to make the story fly.

(Ger) ich würde zu gerne wissen wie es weiter geht, mit den beiden, oder ihrer Tochter

Like you, I find pleasure in the use of the non standard monsters. Really dig the Lovecraft based ones. If we are going on normalish ones, sharks are my vote(favourite animal), no clue if a shark one exists.

Definitely look forward to future content.

I just looked up what a shoggoth was and it's a monster girl, wow I should of known. When I finished the story it seemed like you got her design and idea and background from somewhere. I found an image that looks exactly like you described her. I can see what you were going for. I love this story. And I'mma look up what Lovecraft is. I been seeing that name a lot lately.