All Comments on 'To Ment A Shattered Soul'

Cant wait to see what happens

Great job. More please :D

Ment? Have that talk with your editor. Mend, right? Mortor? No, mortar, right?

Haha ya the ment part was suppose to be mend but i wasnt paying attention and i have no idea how to change it. Yes both are suppose to be mortar but some things slipped by both of us not gonna lie haha

Keep focused on the future...good start!

what a great start, please keep going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great start please keep going with the next chapter.

just a nother want to be writer who can't finish a story.

Black and white morals, dubious ethics. Don't think - feel the blood bond and react with ALL the intellect of your testicles.

Congratulations.

Please.

dshort, I hope you will keep going with this story. I really enjoyed this first chapter and have been waiting for the next.

And?