All Comments on 'To Protect and Serve Ch. 02'

Your story is so entertaining and well written that I am hopelessly ignoring my own work just to sit and read it. Now I am completely jealous and wishing that I could write the way you do. This is fantastic.

Looking forward to the rest of it.

Nice work.

I love the story. I have been a long time fan and it is great to read something new from you.

you gave in to my stubbornness and cut the chapters into smaller pieces. I'm not doing any writing of my own (though I should be) because I'm having too much fun beta-reading your work. (or maybe I'm just procrastinating, lol) Bring on more chapters! :)

I want a gorgeous werejaguar of my own!

~Sylvie (hey, you deserve kudos!)

Not only are you a master storyteller who write freaking hot sex scenes, but you made a Monty Python joke. That's a 6+ in my book!

I counted 3 Monty Python and the Holy Grail references there.

-Dennis

-Anarcho-whatever Commune

-"Be quiet! I order you to be quiet!"

I freaking love this seriesso far, even if I'm not really into BDSM.

As in chapter 1, the sex detracts from the story - again I skipped major parts of it simply to follow the plot

You still need an editor for proper word usage. The story line & character development are very good.

I know there's a good story somewhere in there, it's just swolled up in all the gratuitous sex and BDSM. I understand that if I'm unhappy with something I can just stop reading, but I still hope that the story will take over and can be enjoyed. I know the author warned me, but I was hoping for more story. Oh well.