All Comments on 'To Protect and Serve Ch. 03'

by Evil Alpaca

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rgraham666rgraham666almost 16 years ago
Loving this story

I'm enjoying learning about the motivations of the central character, learning what makes her tick.

And that's an…interesting…twist at the end.

Can't wait for the rest. Well done.

DaniellekittenDaniellekittenalmost 16 years ago
I scan the new page everyday

for more of this story. It's addicting and wonderful written. All I can say, EA, you've got another winner here.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Great story

I was so glad to see another story by you. Full Moon Strays, Breathless, Dead Mans World...you are the best at this genre. Each chapter pulls me in and I check every day for the next one!

naughty_megsnaughty_megsover 15 years ago
Another awesome story!

As always you have created another story that I avidly read!

You really do come up with some great ideas and I definitely will enjoy seeing where this one ends up!

Thanks for the wonderful stories, and especially for this new addition.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
ahhh

what a way to end the chapter now i know im going to be checking everyday to see the next chapter. great work as always keep it coming =D

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Comments

the cliffhanger is brilliant, the clipboard was a funny touch and so far every chapter has made me leave a comment saying just how damned good I think you are. Please keep writing!

StormmasterXStormmasterXover 12 years ago
ahh jimmy fisk

we all have our own fisk, and I am glad someone here can speak for him. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I really enjoy it

This Series get better and better! I love the plot as well as the characters. It's sexy as hell but so much more, too! I'm glad that this story is far from finished!

Thanks for sharing!!!!

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyover 2 years ago

Counseling or psychiatrists or friends or family cant truly help anybody with an deep soul pain , like loosing a soul or an horror happening or death or else ...... The soul needs to find her own speed and path to heal or may is connected forever with such traumatic horror ....... Really impressive EvilAlpaca

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Rereading and I still think the sex detracts from the story line.

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