All Comments on 'To Replace What Was Taken'

by Rabdog

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Too fake

First. I Virgin takes a 10" cock her first time with one short scream and then has the best sex. Why even have the robbers? Unless dad hired them they wouldn't make them have sex then leave everything. The brothers are all just ok with this ? Then 14 kids in 19 years. Lord it is possible but dangerous. Come on. Serious editing needed also

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Serious Math Errors

Mom died when Loo Loo = 10yo...

10 + (7 + 6 + 4 years between children) = 27 years

+ ~1 yr for pregnancy = 28 yrs married, NOT 35.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
sounds

Too screwed to read

RabdogRabdogalmost 8 years agoAuthor
Author response

The math in this story is accurate as it is 35/36 years together when you include the eight years she has been dead. This is one of the first stories I have written so since then I have begun editing my work and adjusting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
"too fake" reply

I've known families that had ten kids, with 1-3 years between each kid, depending. Not impossible at all. And, females are all different. Some could fit a penis of that size, some might not. So, really, nothing sounds fake. Some parts seem fishy, but other than that, not really.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Negative Stars

I’d rate this negative stars if possible. This is one of the worst editing jobs I’ve seen on Literotica on top of one of the worst story lines I’ve read.

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