by MelloT
This is really great work!!! Please keep the chapters coming. Nicole
It was so good, both chapters. You have become a new favorite! I hope you keep up with Beth and Jack. Good work!
More pleaseeeee!!! :) I can't wait for the next chapter sooo please hurry! :)
This chapter had an ending! It was well written and flowed well.
Thank you.
call this police or the crazy farm this needs help it just reads a manual for pyschopath and what to do
To all the negative comments its in non consent section for a reason. If you dont
Like this type of fantasy go read somethng else.
F****ing fantastic. ... it's a FANTASY story. If the time period was set back a few hundred years, this would be called a historical romance.
Btw, check out the famous 1950’s Oscar winning musical "Seven Brides for Seven Brothers". The brides are kidnapped by mountain men, fall in love and marry their captors.
He's raping her. No way she enjoys it, even in a fictional story.
It is good to see Jack "taming" Beth with kindness and love rather then with violence. Beth is growing now, embracing her inner woman, and learning to become Jack's good wife, bringing happiness into their lives.
She is losing the malignant and useless "gender equality" nonsense that women are so pathetically indoctrinated with. Women need LOVE, not "equality"!
She has the opportunity to (for the first time in her life), become a 100% real woman.