All Comments on 'To Take a Wife Ch. 02'

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spearman1spearman1over 13 years ago
Awesome!!

Completely and totally awesome!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Awaiting the next chapter...

Hope it comes soon!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
hot hot hot

Love it. Good story, please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
more, more, more.........

PLEASE!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great Work!!!

This is really great work!!! Please keep the chapters coming. Nicole

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
More, PLEASE!

It was so good, both chapters. You have become a new favorite! I hope you keep up with Beth and Jack. Good work!

IzkaPlm18IzkaPlm18over 13 years ago
MORE!

More pleaseeeee!!! :) I can't wait for the next chapter sooo please hurry! :)

Scorpio44Scorpio44over 13 years ago
Much better

This chapter had an ending! It was well written and flowed well.

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
lol

Jack should be put down and Beth put away.

no more

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
makes me want to...

call this police or the crazy farm this needs help it just reads a manual for pyschopath and what to do

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
awsome story

To all the negative comments its in non consent section for a reason. If you dont

Like this type of fantasy go read somethng else.

mapili50mapili50over 9 years ago
Agree. GREAT story!

F****ing fantastic. ... it's a FANTASY story. If the time period was set back a few hundred years, this would be called a historical romance.

Btw, check out the famous 1950’s Oscar winning musical "Seven Brides for Seven Brothers". The brides are kidnapped by mountain men, fall in love and marry their captors.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Heaven my ass

He's raping her. No way she enjoys it, even in a fictional story.

Iamcurious999Iamcurious999almost 4 years ago
The Taming of the Shrew...

It is good to see Jack "taming" Beth with kindness and love rather then with violence. Beth is growing now, embracing her inner woman, and learning to become Jack's good wife, bringing happiness into their lives.

She is losing the malignant and useless "gender equality" nonsense that women are so pathetically indoctrinated with. Women need LOVE, not "equality"!

She has the opportunity to (for the first time in her life), become a 100% real woman.

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