All Comments on 'To The Palace Ch. 04'

More please don't take too long to keep posting. And will u make it longer

However the writing style seems very rushed with actions, and characters' thoughts and feelings.

Also it seems you're taking the route of 'what's the worst/most shocking thing that can happen here' and then inserting that into the plot.

Thanks for posting.

But I do appreciate chapter 4 coming out relatively quickly after chapter 3. Because (self-confession time) if there's too long a gap between updates - say over 3 weeks, then I sometimes forget to find out if the next chapter has been posted - and then I may have to go back and read earlier chapters because I can't quite remember the storyline. So (request time), GoodWolf, please try to publish another chapter before the end of the month. Many thanks!