by Sinnical
but would have given a lower score or not scoring at all. But you redeemed your story at the very end by having him say he loves her and it read like he meant it. ( I always comment on Lit that I give 5s for both partners saying those 'magic words', I still surmise that BDSM is about kink, passion and LOVE)
I adored this absolutely love how affectionate he is to her at the end. I mean he was affectionate in a master/husband way but calling her a goddess at the end just made it. x33
Thank you so much