All Comments on 'Together'

by Snowmomma

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Dark LoveDark Loveover 18 years ago
Compelling but brief

I liked this story, but it was a little too short. The part where she salivates for him is particularly hot!

I would have liked more character development. What is therir relationship? Why does she trust him? Have they been together a few times or many?

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