All Comments on 'Together'

by GirlWithBoots

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Dreams of DesireDreams of Desirealmost 18 years ago
Well...

...Too short - but sweet all the same:)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
You missed writing about the best part.

I always look forward to good descriptions of the smell of good well process shit.

An Awful CadAn Awful Cadalmost 18 years ago
background

Well written, although I'm not a fan of second-person perspective. And while I appreciate that you got right to the good part, I'm curious to know why it's been a "long time" since they've done this. It might have heightened the drama to know why it's so special.

LadyLovesBlueLadyLovesBlueover 16 years ago
Like the female perspective

I liked your perspective from the woman's viewpoint. Most of the anal sex stories are from males and are too vulgar. Just enough hot words and action to be a real turn on. I was able to relate very well to what you were portraying...

LadyLovesBlue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Exdellent.

lorencinolorencinoalmost 13 years ago
I am astonished

Astonished at the sensuous immediacy of your writing. The ease with which I enter the scene, drifting on your words, to quickly become embroiled in the excited immediacy of our entwining arousal provides everything I could wish for in coming here to read your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Outstanding.

Very erotic, which is what this site is supposed to be about. If you like anal fantasies, check out Leezy's stuff.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

HOT. Pls write more stories!

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