All Comments on 'Together Again'

Very, very good on the story. Maybe this story is a warm up for my foxgirl story. But who knows...

What more future stories are coming after this?

And a nice tail, er... tale.

Thanks for sharing. 5* Slainté

Overall I liked the story even with it's quirks. Now dont take this the wrong way, (or do) I found the line "You're making me relieve myself in your mouth." Hysterical. My bit of input for you to improve as a writer is to say the dialog or exposition out loud. I find it to be very helpful in constructing better sentences.

A more subtle issue I found was your use of "had been". Instead of saying "had been", you could a contraction (example) "He had been blacksmithing." Could be "He'd been blacksmithing." I would go into further detail, but I'm on a phone and this is a bitch to type. Hope it's helpful nonetheless.

You should be proud of how great of an erotic writer you are.

Wow, I had forgotten about posting this one. :-p

Not exactly a warm up for your story, but I thought I'd relieve some of the craving by using a fox girl in this short story. ;-)

Oh, definitely a nice tail, even if I do say so myself. :-)

Slainté agad-sa! *freshens up the beer*

I recognise your points, but I hadn't focused on dialog with this one. It was all about experimenting on making description work without distraction.

Porn dialog is difficult anyway, the real thing during sex is just embarrasing and I'm trying to see if I can create dialog without sounding crude. Like writing the scene without mentioning dick or cunt itself.

Thanks, but I've not yet convinced myself I am. Need more praise. :-)

Have to work more on getting the right tone that I'm after.

Again a lovely story, but you forget the epilogue! ;-)

Did they get some children? What happened to the bully? Perhaps he felt in love with a furry, too?

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Beautiful story - Beautifully written!

11/10!!!!!

Great story, this is one of my all time favorites,

Thank you for writing such a great story.