All Comments on 'Together for the Holidays Ch. 03'

I fucking called it from the first entry.

Anyway, thanks for finishing the story. I'm kinda bummed the that Trisha wasn't bummed (or otherwise) by Terry. However if that is the end you have chosen for your characters, I can say that I'm fine with it.

PS: Don't get me wrong a spin-off or sequel series exploring their lives together would be most welcome.

I really liked it. I hope you continue writing on this series.

Thank you!

Not sure how I feel about this ending... I feel like we were at a precipice at the end of ch. 2, and this chapter just started low and really left me wanting. I just don't know if you didn't know how to end it or if you lost your muse, or what but this was by far the worst way you could have gone. No character resolution, no story resolution. Hell with adding dad being gay just made more questions. I hope one day the muse strikes and you do a proper rewrite of this chapter. I like what I've read of yours but this was a disappointment to me. Still need a proofreading editor too.

Sorry, but to me, this was a depressing story. Especially the third chapter.

Cool. I hope you continue writing on this series.

LOL! That went in about ten directions all at once. Well done. Thanks for sharing it.

A lovely fun romp.

An interesting tale of incest and debauchery. Keep up the great work.