All Comments on 'Tom & Sue & John & Debbie Ch. 17'

It's a wonder Charlotte could walk the next morning. However, from her story, she had a great time.

Hot, hot, hot! I think my monitor is about to melt down.

Glad you're back to writing this series. I like the way you're bringing in the different characters now that Debbie and Sue have gone their separate ways. Look forward to the next chapter to see what big brother does after catching his little sister and Tonya playing around.

Char had fun. It's good to see you writing again.

More twists and turns than a roller coaster! What's going to happen next??

Glad to see you back on Lit! This chapter caught me by surprise but I guess that is something of your trademark-huh? Look forward to seeing what big brother is up too in the next chapter. Hope it doesn't take soooo long to post!