All Comments on 'Tom Greer, P.I.'

The story is ok but I see a trend in many of your stories where the "offended party" manages to fall in love (or lust) the minute he or she meets a helping party. This is especially unbelievable if that person is serving in some sort of professional capacity. IMHO it speaks just as bad of the two as the cheating spouse.

"Yes she can give you much better advise than I can. She is the very best I have ever seen, I have worked with her for five years. I have never seen a unhappy client. You will like her, follow me. She is in this building."

We entered the office two doors down and the receptionist waved us on through. I opened the door for the girl and the very lovely woman behind the desk rose to shake her hand. He introduced herself as Betty Burke.

I would ADVISE you to get an editor then correct, that is my ADVICE. HE introduced himself as Bettty Burke. SHE

What is it with "some" writers, that they think everyone falls in love upon seeing the their preceived "soul mate"? Or whom they believe to be their soul mate and jump right into bed...in real life, I don't think so....