All Comments on 'Tom's Downfall'

A waste of time to read. Not very erotic

what they did is generally known as kidnapping, and i'm pretty sure after a week somebody would notice he was missing and call the police...

Dumb as hell. but still funny. Thanks for the read.

it leave u hanging on what could happen there could be torture or castration hell has no furry like a pissed off women especially 4 of them I thought it was a good story the way it was presented could be different but honestly he wouldn't want to be kidnap by women your dating ?

You stopped right before the best part!

A big fight , with lots of blood and injuries , would lead to police involvement ...

When he started to kink and punch and girls started to bleed you really think they got to him? I don't think any of those women would trade some revenge for a broken nose or a broken ankle. And even if they do, he knows them all. Their DNA will be everywhere and unless they're willing to kill him and try and ditch the body, they're going to prison for years and years. Another poorly thought out story with no thought given to consequences. You sure you aren't Edrider72?