All Comments on 'Toni's Awakening Pt. 03'

by Shaima32

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jenorma2012jenorma2012about 6 years ago
pretty good ending

And yes the saying goes live everyday as if it were your last, but taking it one day at a time does make sense as well, in the words of Bill Murry from Groundhogs Day movie no matter what happens tomorrow, I am happy today

However I made a rule that I would never become involved with a co-worker in any way other than just friendship, but that is just me

MaonaighMaonaighabout 6 years ago
That little extra

I very much liked Carina's philosophy and wisdom in this final chapter and Toni's acceptance of them. It was interesting to compare the mechanics of a new relationship with the AA concept of 'One day at a time'. I've enjoyed all of your stories, Shaima, but some of them seem to give the reader that little bit extra. "Toni's Awakening" is one such story.

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenabout 6 years ago
I loved it!

This was a very good story, and I enjoyed it from start to finish. Thank you for sharing it with us!

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