All Comments on 'Tony's Tale Ch. 01'

some human emotions improve the story. Continue this way please.

Good story!

I enjoyed this story very much. Keep it coming!

sense at all. The slut he was with served a purpose, she gave him sex without cause, which pulled him from the depths. Now let him find love where everyone but him knows it is.

Nice story, would like to have a little more detail, and maybe slow it down a bit.

I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens between Tony and that chick. Sounds like a MILF!

Can't wait, hurry with part 2

from Impatience

Though I do not quite understand why he did not put his

heart on the line for Vanessa immediately. She was a known jewel of great price

This was an enjoyable read. The relationship between Tony and Vanessa, even though platonic, was the most intense part of this story for me. I like your story-telling technique. Well done. :)

The talk about cars, engines and rev heads just lost me. Pathetic. I Am glad you only wrote two chapters of this crap!