All Comments on 'Too Exciting Ch. 05'

I might be a bit to excited for the next part ofor your story. Keep up the good work.

Absolutely and incredible story. One of the best I have ever read on Literotica or any online story site. PLEASE hurry with the next chapters. I am dying of anticipation.

Thank you for the positive comments and ratings - much appreciated. I will be posting further chapters but please be patient as the remainder is only sketched out at present and will take a little while to write.

I'm loving this story and can't wait for the climax! (pun intended, lol)

ttfn,

tina

I'm loving reading this. Lily is such a turn on. Had me up till 3am last night reading from episode 1 right through to 5 !

I'm usually pretty dominant but lily just fucking destroys that. Your depiction of her is absolutely brilliant.

Reminds me of enextase's stories but with a twist

Going well, but leaving us hanging like this is rather...deflating.