All Comments on 'Too Good To Be True? Ch. 01'

this looks like it will be a very good story.... cant wait for you to post more chapters soon!!!!

This look really good right now---based off the first chapter! :)

I can't wait for the next chapter, i'm really curious lol Sooo do not keep us waiting long for it! :)

Very good start, please don't keep us waiting for the next chapter.

AWESOME!

What kills a good story is to much time between chapters. You have made a great start...keep going!!

This was a great first chapter and I can't wait to hear more.

Besides the few grammatical errors(which we all have) this chapter was a good set up for the ones to come. As far as hurry up and get them out, I say take your time. Everyone wants to read stories quick but don't rush chapters just to please. If they are really fans they willl hang in with you no matter how long it is between chapters.

nice start. follow up with the next chapter fast. :)

true fans will stay no matter what but we are allowed to hate for a bit if you leave us for a while and then use a short chapter and then leave again all in all amaing 1st chapter

i like this, this has some very good potential to turn into a nice story :) keep it up

That was some excellent writing for someone who hasn't written in a few years! Fantasic first chapter! Too short! I seriously hope you are working on more.....please??

I think it is a great start. I look forward to your developing the plot. But why would he not call and say he had to go to be with family or something? Why would he just abandon her if she is his mate? I can't think of a good reason for no contact if he is worried about her hating him. So I hope you can give me a good one :)

I'm really enjoying it so far - but I also can't wait to see why he left her if she's his mate and why he's talking about her arriving in NY when she said she's going to GA. Please update!!

shifter--he is in savannah. It was saying 1000 miles away he was in his office. 1000 miles from NY where she is now. So yeah he's there and she is going there in 3 mos. for the school.

I just don't understand why he won't give her a call and say sorry. can't get away for now but I still care. Jeez.

can't wait for new chapter! hope it comes soon

Nice one but I think we've already read somting similar

Love story can't wait for next chapter!