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TJSkywindTJSkywindabout 7 years ago
Remarkable Tale

From interest to concern as the protagonist started a downward spiral to a not-bad ending. Well conceived and well done.

Thanks for sharing. 5*

PaladinInBlackPaladinInBlackabout 7 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thank you TJSkywind

cmsheaffcmsheaffabout 7 years ago
Really cute

I loved the way you morphed her from one reality to the next. Very clever

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
one of the best stories I've read

I love genie/wishing stories so much, and this is one of the best erotic/non-erotic stories I've read in god-damn forever.

PaladinInBlackPaladinInBlackabout 5 years agoAuthor
Re: one of the best

Thank you so much!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
5/5

Very well done. Unique concept, well executed, and I liked the ending.

texlootexloo6 months ago

That was a very different take on a wish fulfillment story! I love the concept and the execution.

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I like to write, but I'm better at starting stories than at finishing them, so I have a rather large pile of unfinished stuff spring around. Most of my stuff is 'happily ever after'. You've been warned. FYI: I have posted a lot of this under a similar name (without the 'InBla...

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