All Comments on 'Too Much of a Good Thing'

Very good story, what was going on at home to get him on the road and what went on next would also make great stories. Thanks for writing and sharing!

I love the relationship between the title, the absence of any hint that Jane, Harry and especially Stephen did not see Jane and Stephen's relationship as anything but open and long term and the O. Henry twist. I do hope you are willing to continue here even if you cannot always produce such gems.

It's a bare bones story, in classic short story form. I like that author didn't feel the need to spell everything out. In the form, the ending is left hanging. I appreciate that.