by AKentuckyLady
I started reading & thought 'Oh crap' another fairy comes to life story, but in the end it wasn't bad. Nice one
I loved this story. So imaginative and descriptive, I could picture everything in my mind...
Hi, liked your story AKentuckyLady, it was a nice story, talking the fairy thru self discovery before progressing to intercourse was nice. The first story I wrote was criticised for not putting enougth sex in at the end, finishing a story too soon.
I felt this was the same. It would have been nice if the fairy had then gone on to try... doggy style, sucking cock, pick your favourite position...
other than that, well done :)
Just right...! Hopefully another chapter about when she returns next year?
Creative and imaginative. Well written with a great flow to it. Wonderful second effort by an up and coming author. I can't wait to read more. You have a great writing voice!
A nice balance of heart-tugging, then humor, and leading into some very hot sex. Well done for a second story, looking forwards to the next.
Hope there is a follow on with a happey ending for this story, that's me being a softy.
and his sharing of her awakening.
Sadly, she won't be able to do it again for another 1,000 years.
He, on the other hand, can find a partner much sooner.
hopefully.
A beautiful tale. A sexy tale of self discovery. The scene was easy to imagine. A great mix of story and sex without being hardcore. Flow and pace were well done keeping the interest.
Nicely written and captivating to know what happens. Great story KL
I was curious if I would like this story but I was hooked and reeled in by a new approach to the ageless tooth fairy icon.
The only thing left for me to do is sit on my couch, wrap my hand around my cock and wait for my own fairy girl to appear. I know she's out there somethere!
Matt_Next_Door
Once again I was elated with this story and look forward to more from this lovely, sensual author.
...written, such detail! A most enjoyable story, I wish you could write my dreams! Thank you, I hope you aren't finished.
One of the cutest bits of erotic I've ever read.
Thanks for making me smile. (Hope if a tooth fairy comes to my house, it's a dude)
I am Lizzie. I am the tooth fairy. Thank you for the wonderful sex. Muah.
What a beautiful fantasy story this was to read. Well done Kentucky Lady, well done!!
It does what a good story does, left me wanting more!
Nicely done. All that should have happened between Tink and Peter in Robin Williams version of Peter Pan. Thank you!
This was a very good read. Well written story. Thank you for sharing.
From the opening scene everything is believable. It is a delightful concept brilliantly executed.
The author REALLY likes the man to perform oral on her before intercourse. Take note guys and do the same for your lover.