All Comments on 'Topless In The Wilderness'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
It's a cute story

It's a nice story, but given the number of typos "their" instead of "there" I wonder how it became an editor's choice. That's not your fault, author, congratulations on the 'E'.

magmamanmagmamanover 18 years ago
Interesting

The part I find interesting is the Editor's Pick since this is somewhere between humor and voyeur, very short with more development on rapids than on anything else.

Some typos, too, but not everyone is perfect like me. LoL

Still, a scenario that could be developed out a lot and be fun. I have to vote 4 since there is no 3.8.

MGM

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Was confused, too!

I only read this because I spotted the editor's "e". However, I didn't get much out of the story. Sorry!

Congrats on the "e". Maybe more experienced eyes spotted something I did not.

LedwardflashLedwardflashabout 15 years ago
Sucked

I want my money back.

auhunter04auhunter04almost 11 years ago
priceless

Howz fishing

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
canuding

How about going 'canuding'?....that is to say, paddling while 'clothed with the sun' (and a PFD, of course). We stay in that state for the entire camping experience.

The Rangers don't mind....oh yeah, we're in Canada!

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